Strange
From the beginning I knew this flash wouldnt do much for me. The music was high abnoxious and the animation was so-so. Overall it isn't terrible, but it's not good. Keep trying though, maybe part two will fit the story into one piece.
Reviews for "graymen pt.one"
TheMeEvan responds:
yeah, the next part is being redone because i got a Wacom Tablet
Let me tell you what to do:
A) You shouldn't say you made films out of boredom. It makes it look bad right from the start.
B) Don't bitch at people who take the time to review your film, even if they rate it bad.
C) Get over yourself - if you think you're an artist by just wanking your animations into zeros and ones then you should consider that artists took time to make their artwork and never said they "made it out of boredem".
I'll keep my review short otherwise, since you seem to have trouble with long reviews:
- Graphics: good, but sloppy. Needs more time.
- Sound: Fine; does without voices; constant fuzzy interference noise is annoying.
- Interactivity: I think something's wrong with the pre-loader. You should be able to click on "PLAY" AFTER it has pre-loaded.
- Story: I can't really tell... it's too short.
Overall: Why don't you take your time on the next one? You could have made it twice as long since you seem to be fast at drawing and animating. Go ahead, I liked it.
TheMeEvan responds:
I got really bored while reading your review and made a cartoon! Oh god why did you write such a long review!? i can't handle it! TOO MANY WORDS!
just dont get it....
guess i missed the point...plz...if u try again spend more time on it. ty
TheMeEvan responds:
Don't tell me what to do
WELL....
IS GOOD BUT YOU CAN MAKE IT BETTER
TheMeEvan responds:
AND YOU BASE THIS CLAIM ON WHAT?
OK
Even though it made no sense and had no point, I like the style. Get that second one out.
TheMeEvan responds:
YES MISTER