This is dective John Kimble, I'm a cop you idiot
That was Ok wish it was longer
This is dective John Kimble, I'm a cop you idiot
That was Ok wish it was longer
O.K.
But it was a little short and it wasn't really that funny.
It was silly
It was silly but i liked it and had fun watching this, good entertainment especially since im from california hehe
Anyways funny humor here
~X~
Style Without Substance
Your style is nice and so is your voice work...content-wise your movie is lacking--that and the Arnold Shwarzenegger thing is old. Not bad for a first submission.
Do you know what you've just done?
You've created a precursor to what could be a decent series.
However, you've also pissed off the majority of California. I'm Australian, and I know that you don't wanna do that.
- Matthew