hmmm
pretty good, Infact I liked it. This would have been really cool if it wasn't stick but it was still good. Keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Life & Death"
TvP responds:
Thanks for the review, my next flash will be awsome. You'll see..
Heh, odd
Odd yes, but funny. I liked it. I'm odd, I know.
I'm going to see it again. Try another ending.
I will like to see more from you, no doubt you'll improve in time.
TvP responds:
Thanks, this is basically my first good flash because I haven't been doing this for to long.
May all sticks burn in hell.
Using sticks is a cop-out. Learn BEFORE you try to gain fame. Im soure you wont want this piece of shit in your track record a year, heck even a month from now. THis sucked. My advice:
Get to the fucking point. Average NG viewer is a hyperactive 14 year old with teh attention span of a 5 year old.
Blood, guts, and sex. And maybe beer.
I can detect talent, so Im not talking all shit and no advice.
This did piss me off because the size was large.
Thats my only real gripe.;
Good luck
-Livecorpse
TvP responds:
Thanks for the long review, but I have many things to say to you. "Using sticks is a cop-out" no your wrong thats what started flash, and thats what people start off with. I'm 15, and so are a lot of my friends on NG, but we are smart, make average flash, and dont have the attencion span of a 5 year old, more like an adult. I use blood and guts in my flash, no sex or beer. I couldn't help about the size. But thanks anyways, Livecorpse.