Not bad
As mentioned before, that crackling was pretty noticable, but fix that up that this could definitely turn out to be a solid piece if you keep it where it's going.
Reviews for "(needs a title) ver2"
Subtly Triumphant
How about:
Deilig Hær
Beautiful Army in Norwegian.
btw...
the piano sound is making a little crackling noise. It would be better if you EQ'ed it a little :) also, I like the first 40 secs, but the last ones just didnt flow that well in my opinion. ;)
It's improved...
Even though I hate to say it, but you've basically surpassed yourself. I love the drums you put into this and the violins give it a nice touch. You do need some more added on though although I don't know what else could be added on. I say try to reach two minutes. Also I've got a new title for you...
The Moonlight Lake