I usually understand that first songs aren't the best, but this literally sounds like you put a 6 year old on FL Studio.
First songs are of course room for improvement, but I suggest you seriously need to look up a tutorial. This song is not the worst thing in the world but definitely far from decent.
Y'know what it's literally just trash never cook again.
FUEGO EN EL AGUJERO
FIRE IN THE HOOOOOOLE
if i was forced to listen to it i would
if i'm to be blunt and a bit rude, this sounds like a fnf song from 2021 and i mean this in a bad way
but i know you can improve. keep at your craft, learn, study up on music theory (it'll help), and i think if you do all of that, you'll eventually be good at it. but for now, half a star
dont worry its simple