Not bad, but not too good either.
Intro text done unprofessionally.
"Frightening video" was irrelevant to the flash video, and seems like it was inserted to make it longer.
The first review part was a bit boring, but the second one was sort of funny.
The best part of the vid was the abrupt ending.
Not bad for a few hours work, though it could have improved if you "sat on" it for a few days, to think through the aspects of the video.