Woah dude
I hear a good new approach on your music.
This SOO reminds me of BassHunter, he's a badass.
But still, you're doing good, I'm not saying your ripping him off, it's definatly unique, but SHIT it reminds me of him so much.
You have good composition, this is definitely worth clubbing to..
Very interesting!
Your use of vocals reminds me of a lot of other techno-ish music with vocals, especially the pitch and intonation of them. It seems that a lot of male vocals for techno songs have that strange pitch modulation, audible at around 0:24, 0:25-ish. I never quite understood what was up with that, but it sounds good anyway, so I don't mind much ^^
Anyway, time for the review.
Intro - Well, it introduces the song nicely, but it isn't very long and cuts right to the point (and the lyrics!), so I think its job is accomplished well enough. It certainly wasn't absent, it just could have been a bit longer, maybe. Not too much, your length worked. (2/2)
Body 1 (:45ish until 1:30) - This part is kind of generic, could use some spicing up. I'm no musical expert, I won't pretend to know what to add to it, but it needs a bit of something. (2.5/3)
Body 2 (1:31 until 2:15) - This had a nice beat, good rhythm, rockin' melody, but it was perhaps, once again, a tad too short! Maybe lengthen it out another 15 seconds, give the people what they want :p (2.5/3)
Falling Body (2:15-2:25) - Just a bit of a winding down, but adds a new instrument nonetheless. (1/1)
Outro (2:25 to end) - Well, it ends the song, and roughly as it began. Gives a nice feeling of coming back to the start of things. (1/1)
Total Score: 9/10. Needs a bit of improvement, but a great song overall. Voted 4 and downloaded.
Holy Crap
There only one thing wrong with this song - its too short. I actually think you could have kept going with that idea for practically another minute. Then you could have swapped out for a third idea, then done a key change back to the first for a finale. But hey, who am I to tell? Superb work on the vocals :D
10/10
5/5
wow
if this song where a chick id do her...... ah... yah good job
Fantastic!
I think this is great. Although I like your style better than the professional style. I think you should stick to your own style, because you have originality. You are still the greatest no matter.