This is great, but...
Hi, Imn! :)
This is, and will always be a great song, but It's unfortunately not perfect...
This is why:
-The tune is, to be honest, a bit boring.
And so is the climax. It's to less of interesting(but mostly, that is ofc. because of the tune.
-A tip on the anti-climax(2:03). Add a baseline or a very silent pad. Maybe also a sweep-down.
-Also some of the drums a to high and a couple of them doesn't fit at all in the song.
The thing's that on the other side is very positive on/in the song:
-The bassdrum did fit perfect and made a extra touch!
-Love the lead that comes in on 1:09, it sounds really awesome!
-Great hihat(and loop) that comes in on 0:55.
Hope you don't find this to criticising. Only doing it to help you cause I can hear that you've got a great potential! :D
I'm giving it 8/10 and a 5/5:)!
Great jobb! Well done!
Keep up the great work!
-EssenceOfTrance-