Good
This peice had a good rhythm that I could tap along to, and I enjoyed the slow build up. However, there seemed to be a few errors in the sound. Little blips that affected the song's enjoyment
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thegreatmorph responds:
Yeah I really don't know what's gone on during the process of uploading it onto newgrounds, the MP3 I uploaded still sounds fine.
But thanks a lot, very much appreciated.
More mastering please
This tune would be awesome if we could tidy up that static touch at the tips of the notes - I tried everything that my headphones could offer me - turned off the bass, turned the volume down to a reasonable level and listened to the tune a few times through to make sure it wasn't interference from something else, but alas, we have this issue.
Still, when you can take that static out of the equation, this is a wonderful tune - quite a basic loop for a start, but it has that nice intro and outtro. If you can work on some variation for the middle, rather than just that sliding scale, it would be nice for the beat.
The melody that you threw in the middle isn't really anything to write home about - try making it move around the scale, rather than a line of notes that are all the same, then up for a few the same and down for another line - otherwise the tune is in danger of sounding too one dimensional.
Once these pieces are worked on, you can really take it to the next level.
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thegreatmorph responds:
thanks you pretty much pin-pointed everything that i duislike about most of my stuff.
well, I'll try and get work on them but it's all on my old computer so there's nothing really i can do about it now.
Thankyou though! Really appreciate it.