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That wasn't exactly much of an intro. You had a little bit of text, and a glowy Halo thing (which wasn't bad itself), but I think you should've done a little more. Yeah, I know, I have no flash or anything, but that doesn't mean my opinion isn't worth anything. I haven't seen your other stuff, so I'm not going to say your flash sucks, but this was too short and boring to be much good.