Wow...haven't seen bible quotes on NG much.
That was a very interesting piece you had there. It was kind of touching at first, then the whole ending threw me off a bit. Maybe I'm a bit dense, but what was the ending supposed to mean? Oh well, good job, keep it up!
whael is coming! repent!
Ermm... not sure what i just saw there
but it wasen't goog at all. I was a retarted story line also.
you still is a retarted story line also
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I liked this! Real good style to it, keep it up man.... and I don't know if you meant to do it or not but the correct spelling is "Whale" .... however looking at your comments I suppose it was intentional.
thank you for your review Noodleboy37...and it actually is spelled "WHAEL". WHAEL IS COMING! REPENT OR SPEND ETERNITY IN HELL!