Reviews for Stick Fight/Tutorial

[Bezman]

Nice but flawed.

It looks reasonably good, but the stick-men change size. I suggest you maybe paste a copy of the original picture somewhere whilst drawing as a guide to the size.

It doesn't look as if they're moving towards or away from the camera - it just looks sloppy.

Also, you should maybe change the button in the NG pre-loader to gotoAndPlay the first frame of the movie, rather than just play as it currently does. (Meaning that the tutorial flashes by.)

Another wee flaw is that the sound is on event - I strongly suggest you always set back-ground music to 'stream'.

My last suggestion is that for your next movie you try something a bit more original that just another stick-man fight.

But the graphics are pretty decent and this was more enjoyable to watch than most stuff submitted.

I also liked the presence of the 'tutorial' - it wasn't that great, but it was nice to have a proper pre-loader that tried to entertain us for a change.

Good luck,
Bez

[GeckoDude]

Not much of a tutorial.

You ought to at least tell them the elements of a good stick fight. As for your stickfight, it was better than some of the other crap we blam, but not even close to Xiao Xiao

[Mosqui]

Sticks...

...fighting, over done, and so is that song you used, I've heard it in far too many stick fighting movies. Where was the tutorial? You got marked down for that too. Try harder next time.

[Shadow93]

You screwed up.

obviously you dont know a thing about AS so you didn't put a STOP action on the tutorial part of the movie, which is why it flashes by very fast. just right click the frame that the tutorial is on and click "actions" and type in this:

stop();

the stop action stops the frame until you press a "next" button

then make a button and give it this:

on(release){
gotoAndPlay(the frame you want it to go to)

and tuddah! that would make this an actual tutorial.

[aiscorp]

Lame

Not very good beside soun effects.Also the tutorial was horrible.