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think think people come on if he says its a tutorial when it isnt this isnt worth 7points come on retatred gay
Reviews for "Stick Fight/Tutorial"
Nice but flawed.
It looks reasonably good, but the stick-men change size. I suggest you maybe paste a copy of the original picture somewhere whilst drawing as a guide to the size.
It doesn't look as if they're moving towards or away from the camera - it just looks sloppy.
Also, you should maybe change the button in the NG pre-loader to gotoAndPlay the first frame of the movie, rather than just play as it currently does. (Meaning that the tutorial flashes by.)
Another wee flaw is that the sound is on event - I strongly suggest you always set back-ground music to 'stream'.
My last suggestion is that for your next movie you try something a bit more original that just another stick-man fight.
But the graphics are pretty decent and this was more enjoyable to watch than most stuff submitted.
I also liked the presence of the 'tutorial' - it wasn't that great, but it was nice to have a proper pre-loader that tried to entertain us for a change.
Good luck,
Bez
good! but i think there's a flaw...
i think there's a flaw in this flash submission you present... when i click 'play' there's like this green/teal coloured screen that flashes quicker than 1 second.. it has like differently drawn sticks & stuff but i can't really tell coz' it flashes so fast mann; - then the flash just resumes the matrix battle style fight... i don't know if you did that on purpose, but that's how it is.. you probably need to compress your background audio track more... it should of been either longer, or the file size should of been smaller...for 700 kb, hope you optimise it soon.. pretty good visuals you presented too, like the teleport fancy stuff - i like i like!
not bad
well the main thing is that theres so many of those matrix style stick fights but its not bad , also, the heads deform and reform a lot, music was good (the usual music for this) and uhh thats about it. but nice work:)