Meh
Before I start this review, one note that is particularly key: LEARN FUCKING AUDIO OPTIMISATION RIGHT FUCKING NOW. I thought I'd seen some bad AO, but this takes the cake. Moving right along...
Graphics: The people are drawn well, everything else looks like shit. Work on the special effects.
Sound: I've heard better and I've heard worse.
Style: Download the Newgrounds preloader, if you've got over four megs, you fucking need a preloader. The bug at the end is annoying as well.
Violence: Sorely disappointing.