It was alright...i guess
Not TOO bad...but ive got some advice for you:
1) you should work more with flash. Animation and graphics are two things you definatley need to work on.
2) Just keep practicing. If this gets blammed, FIX IT, and then re submit it.
The idea is pretty funny, although the whizzing scene was much like Austin Powers. Its pretty good though. Just keep goin