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Reviews for "Solo Track From Divine"

Well-rounded track

The beat is very nice. The beat could be used all by itself. The trumpet line is a great filler for the chorus, however, it didn't completely fill. If you couldn't get a sung chorus by the person doing background vocals, I would recommend a rapped, double voiced chorus to add to the flow.

Now, the lyrics are very deep but could be slightly better. I would advise a longer rhyming phrase. Use about four to eight lines of the same rhyming scheme to achieve a great flow. Not saying that your flow is bad because it's very original; but, try to step back a bit on the annunciation, it could add a bit to your flow. But, do not make it so the listener cannot here your lyrics. Just a few thoughts, but great job! Very well-rounded track.

Nice

So there was some nice slow paced feel on this the sound slowly builds up into something even more with the quality getting even better on this one and I really like the stylish sound you have added to this piece it was not short either so that was a big plus on things as well but anyways overall a great piece some awesome sound works some really good stuff here no changes on this either it's some really good sound works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful sound

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