Style, style, style!
What is it with today's top 5 and ass-kicking stylistic flashes? This is some serious shit you have on your hands. If you can do it right, that red Id-type hair thing can be really awesome. Your style in fight scenes is unsurpassed as far as I've seen, but I have two things to note as far as improvements go:
-If you're going to use Linkin-park-esque music at all, make sure that the timing is right that you evoke the maximum emotion with it. Don't let the music come to a head as the attack is prepared--it should explode at the same time the attack does.
-Every now and then--not often, but on occasion--the action pauses. For just a *little* too long. Consider shortening your pauses a little bit.
Other than that, I think I'll memorize your username so I can follow this and make sure I know when the project is complete...