What a way to start a series, eh?
Who sings the opening song? I want that! The music was a bit gaudy, and got in the way of keeping up with the subtitles. I wish you could do voices, but I think that may be taxing the limits of flash, as anamatronic voices would not do this series justic. You have an incredibly good plot, and your dialouge is quality, and not filled with typos and other garbage. The only thing I'd be concerned about here is the audio, otherwise, you have a great series on your hands, and I'll be eagerly waiting the next installment! Good job!