"Saved by that guy"?
Once again, watch the grammar and maybe think of using text buttons instead of clicking the boxes.
The story's moving along quite nicely. I realize that you should've started off with having a short text message about what this whole thing is about, or myabe a re-cap? I dunno, it's the pain of making a series. You did kill a mog, though, which is something some cannot stand for, kupo.
Two words: Character development.