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Not bad...felt a bit repetitive. Although, you already stated that in your Author comments. Normally, I like progressive things but it was hard to get as deeply into this as the other reviewers.
The closer you get to the end of the song the better and more alive everything starts to get. It felt like a flower slowly blossoming. Sound gay? Kinda. Owell :P The sound really came alive in it's later stages.
Overall I feel you did a pretty good job although I did have to knock a few points off my personal taste scale for the dragging feeling. Overall though Pretty good. Peace and love.