Nice!
That was really slick! The fight scene was impressive, and the music fit well. Aside from doing some smoothing of animation, I'd say you did a perfect job. Keep it up!
Reviews for "-Element- Part 1"
Not bad, not bad at all
+ r the good things - r the bad things
+great action
+ nice music (DDR!!!)
+good opening plot
-the text box (what the guys were saying) too a little long to move to the next box
That's about it, you can improve the way the sticks look, make them smoother, other than that, kick ass bro
Satisfactory
-There were a few flaws in your film. First off the art was horrible and the animations were bad also [Doors Espically]. Your sticks grew taller by the end of the film. And they never turned around. So then that means suddenly the back of their head bacame their face. The storyline was rather unquie for a stick film tho I dont think any stick film deserves a perfect score.
-A side note to. Accordin to a pentagam there are five elemenets. Earth, Wind, Water, Fire and Spirit. I dont know if you forgot spirit or what?
_-=Critic=-_
Ok viet, lets get the lowdown on your work. Xiao Xiao Ripoff!! But Xiao Xiao is better because it has smoother animation. Thats exactly what your cartoon needs. In fact, thats all your toon needs to be up there with the best Stick Animators!
Your almost there! You get a "4"!
FATALITY!
Finish Him...