Uhhhh....
Ok...there was no plot in that....I had no idea what the hell was going on. Every 3 seconds it jumped ahead to a random time, did something uninteligible, then skipped again.
You really need to establish some form of a plot before jumping right into the action, and have something actually happen in the episode. You didn't say who the kid was, who was being attacked or anything like that. Also, put some time inbetween each skip, for God's sake.
you couldve done a lot better
instead of skipping around you shouldve just stayed in one part of the story, people usually dont like jumping around. its not much to follow.
Wasnt Bad
I didnt like the time changing when the text interupted the vid. The music was phenomenal but the rest needs a lot of work
uh...
what was happening? i was like dkhgjafh by the second scene
You have disgraced all pirates everywhere!
I am ashamed! Green hair? Post-Modern Music?! BLASPHEMY! THE WORLD IS CORRUPT! BISCUIT!