whoohoo
it was good
Reviews for "16-Bit Mercenaries"
umm
TomLojko,
i really would stfu if i were you. his movie is better than your PS
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=118904
and sequal which had SHITTIER grammer than this guys, and also got a review of 4 and 2.
so stfu kthxbye~
RogerGargantua responds:
Thanks :)
It drags on
Visuals are good, and the fight scenes weren't bad at all. The big problem is that the fight scenes are like 1/10th of the movie and the rest is a pretty generic story with pretty generic dialogue and that 8 seconds of forest background music playing over and over and over and over and over and over and over again...
It's a 10 minute movie with 3 minutes of stuff. Maybe you could stick buttons in to go faster through dialog or something.
I agree with 'TheRapizt'
The graphics and sound were great, the dialouge and story were boring...
The best part was when the marine shot the forest goblin. That was good ol'cartoon humor. I liked the x-man as the 'monster' too. Maybe you should work with an experienced writer?
Two Problems.
It was a tad long and dragged in places and there were far to many grammatical errors. Make sure everything is the right tense and stuff. And find someone to write out your script a little better. I found it to be something i would hear on the disney channel.