lol!
hehe..im on newgrounds for a little while now and seen alota clock movies....some are crap some are good...and this was good.
Reviews for "Behind the Portal: B"
gold
good to see a movie with strawberry in where he does say 'kekekekeke' and 'bbbbbbbbb' and 'can i drive'.
Saying What Now?
Ok, this was short for a start. It had an original idea which I don't think you executed very well.
Virtually all your graphics were traced to vector horribly, even the bitmaps themselves would have had a smaller filesize than doing that. You drew little more than a few pictures, because the StrawberryClock wasn't your's either.
You must use the worst TTS program on the earth. It was far too fast to hear without the text being there, which was often out of sync and started either too early or too late, usually the latter.
The humour and the idea where both there, and the method of how he created B made me giggle, but then you spoiled the entire humour with the unnecessary swearing. You don't need to swear for a movie to be funny, and often it kills the rest of the humour surrounding it which was the case here.
Put a little more thought and care into your work instead of rushing an idea which would have worked much better if you'd taken a little more time developing it. There's no point to humour if it isn't presented well.
MacintoshClock responds:
1) I'm not the only one who uses traced bitmap backgrounds. Many other users, including fellow Clock Crew members, use this sort of background all the time.
2) I purposely made the voices a little speedy to make it funnier.
3) This is Newgrounds, not elementary school. If you have a problem with the swearing, I suggest you leave this site. Most of the movies here are intended for mature audiences who won't get in trouble if their mommies catch them watching a movie with potty language in it.
4) B is so cool.
Great idea, Yes. Clocks, No.
Behind the portal was a great idea, but I didn't like the clock being the character. A stupid piece of fruit with a clock for a face. I would of liked it more if a reasonable character was chosen. I did however find some things funny despite the clock.
B IS ULTIMATELY SEXY
YES,IT IS