Well...
Your drawing and animation was great, the style was pretty good, and your premise for the story seemed interesting.. at first.. during the loading screen.. which had bad grammer..
You're a talented flash animator obviously, and you have good ideas for plot lines, but this was too short; it felt like a tease of true potential.
Obviously a lot of work was put into it, and I admire it! Good job! But please, make a longer version, or, make it a series and let's see some more.
I looke forward to more, I'll be watching for you Matias.
~ NW.oYm-NO ~