it's your first flash So I'll go easy man
that wasn't really funny and you put far too many sounds into it, I think ya gotta find more homour that's is maybe alittle funnier (if that makes any sense) but if you keep at it I'm sure you could make something real good, keep at it!
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the music was not so good.
Its better you put in on "stream".
The rest was ooookay...
lol
yeh as LQ_Spam said, the best bit was pressing the small X in the corner.The movie was kinda like a rollercoaster, coz its a really scary ride, but after you come off it, u wanna do it again, but this was shit so i say it was a crappy ride and i definetly dont wanna go back on.
What a peice
The whole storyline has been done before. There was almost 0 animation, the graphics were just sprites, and it wasn't that funny. I did like one part though, it was the part where it ended and I got to click the X in the top right hand corner of the window.
well fuck you up the ass with a bigger stick. loser.
ha ha- too short
That first shot was the funniest. Then the rest of it was kinda stupid. BUT! you show promise. keep working on it. Great joke with the upside-down Newgrounds logo. You should have added voices. And next time, use your own backgrounds. I know it's a parody but jeez! and just when I hoped it was gonna get better, it ended.