Graphics are your weakest point..
Its easy to tell that you were using this script as a test for flash because you did alot of cool things, like the lighting effects etc. Howvere I was disapointed in your art, things like the teachers arm and the ninja guy ? Its just generally lazy not animating or drawing them properly. Oh well I enjoyed the script so far and I hope the sequel goes well.
Matrix soundtrack AAACK!!!!!
Boo ... Booo Booo boo boo, man matrix muzik sux, also, a bit more animation, clear sound would be nice, a real concept not a stolen Pink Floyd the Wall rip-off. Other than that, hmmm ... hey for your first attempt, that was better than some total crap ive seen
OK so the music is cliched - Pink Floyd off the wall? That is not in there... Where the hell did you see that?
Any way - it is mostly a private joke! Esp the bald dude.
Anyone else sick of the freakin' Matrix music?
I mean.. really.. It seems like every damn portal entry has the same background music from the Matrix. I think if I hear it one more time I will KILL MYSELF.
YOU GET AFUCKING 1 FOR THE PRELOADER
YOU JUST COPIED SHIT! MAN THAT WAS WORST IVE SEEN IN AGES.
ow it hurts!
i couldent even watch it all man normaly i like birt humor but you arnt funny what did they teach you in that school