Great job!
you did a very good job when making this! there are jsut a few things you new to touch up on .
clearity is a little off, it makes it sound like a jumbled mess in the background,
and what happyhomicide said, you do need to practice with the guitar a little more,
what it needs is more background guitar sounds to, just one guitar being plaied like that doesn't sound that great.
i'll give you a 4/5 and 8/10 Just practice dude, there is always room for more practice. :)