Its good for a "stick" movie person
FIrst of all I guess I should despise you for making a stick movie but I can see you put realy effort into this, The animation was of an acceptible standard and your developing a plot now matter how cliched it was rather succsesfully. I still prefer the traumaville moves to this as thier soooooo cool.....mmmm large breasts.mmmmmm.......but with a little work on more ambiounce and this will go far
not bad
It looks like you got a good start with the plot, kinda curious how it will continue, the drawings were alright, and good use of imagination (cause of the story), it seems to have a touch of anime in it (not too fond of anime), like with those quick scenes with lines flying by, and some other stuff, which I won't get into detail about, anyways, nice job, keep up the good work!
Good Cliffhanger
Good story line. Can't wait for the next one.
Ambitious
You tried to do a lot here: different angles, sound fx, create suspense and actually tell a story. None of it really worked, but that's only because you lack polish. The target you shot for is quite a bit higher than everything else out there, so it's a little more obvious when you miss. Keep going in the direction you're going, and you'll get there.
Hey, I know how ya feel
I myself am in the middle of making a flash movie, but I suck at flash overall. But I'm sure if you stick with it, you'll go great distances.