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Reviews for "On a Train"
I wish I was Hiro! I would grind her ass... grind it like my life depend on it.
It's been a while I have seen the movie and I don't remember all the characters names, but I know who know they are, and I would fondle their breasts while my teenage character cock on that ass until it hardens then I would pull her pants down.
WOW
The rendering is great as always and GoGo and Hero look fine but Lemons a bit off.
First off her ribcage is huge and her proportions overall are a bit weird. On top of that, her arm that is grabbing the grip bar is way too long. The angle of the forearm suggests that the shoulder to the elbow is super long and way longer than the forearm. You should also be able to see more of her arm than just her hand and forearm.
I would also suggest making the train seem more crowded to give a sense that he's stuck in this situation but that's just me. figured Id throw it out there
Anyway, sorry if this seems overly critical but these issues really pull away from an otherwise great piece. Hope this helps.
RavenRavenRaven responds:
Thanks for the feedback. If I manage to go back and spend some more time on this image then I'll try to fix up the parts of it that you pointed out.