Damn those nazi's! Always after my egg yolk!
... I wonder what they do with it... Bake cakes?... Eat em' Sunny Side up? hmm... I will ponder this for years. Anyhow. Good Flash, a little slow, but still, it was pretty funny. Just improve the animation... Since there isn't a lot going on, just people standing. Even when Indiana...er...EGGdiana go pulled up by his whip, he didn't animate at all, he just moved up... Well, it was good. Just improve it a little for the next one.
This was good
Eggdiana Jones and the Carton of Doom was awesome so I couldn't wait to view this one, but I don't think it was as good as the first.
A couple of suggestions of mine would be:
1. Get real voices, the computerized voices are not a good idea for such a good movie like this. I know you said you're no good at voices but I'd give you money to hire some people if that's how this sort of stuff works. You should start a website and take up a collection through paypal like a lot of flash people do.
2. Make Eggdiana Jones more calm and relaxed; I mean during the whole movie he was getting pissed off and was swearing which is out of character.
3. Have different ways of killing other eggs than just shooting them.
4. I noticed that you gave Eggdiana a nose in this movie. I think he looks better without it unless he's going to need it for some reason.
5. And the cameo appearance by Mr. Peanut was a funny idea. I'd use him in a later movie but he needs his cane and monocle.
I hope to see another movie soon. I mean this is a classic amoung movies with eggs in them. Plus this is my longest review ever so I hope you actually read it.
1. I'm working on getting voice actors for the next one. The problem was that I basically wrote this movie as I went, so it was impossible to have any lines pre-recorded.
2. I thought it was kind of humorous when he got pissed off, but maybe that was just me.
3. Yeah, I didn't really realize until after that I killed like 4 nazi eggs with guns. I'll be more creative next time.
4. I liked the nose... made him look more alive. He'll probably recieve a slight make-over before Ep.3.
5. It wasn't originally supposed to be Mr. Peanut. That's jus tthe name I gave him when I made the credits. He'll likely return... maybe as a bigger foe.
Yes I read your review. Now what are the odds that you'll read my reply?
Neal young?
Very good.
This series is turning out to be really good overal. I laughed the most when the Neal Young song played when Eggdiana was riding through the desert on the camel. The drool hanging out of the camel's mouth is funny! Little details like that really add alot to a good movie.
The animation is a bit choppy, maybe try a higher fps next time. Of course that means more work on a frame per frame basis.
You had the right idea.....
This was a very good flash, however it could use some changes.....First, I can't stand those clock voices..It SEVERELY undermined the graphics...U should use real voices.....Second, Eggdiana dropping "F" bombs? Not likely...He seems like a better person / egg than that.....I dont think he should swear....Are the swastikas backwards on purpose....Maybe as to not offend anyone??? Or is that just an accident?? Anyways, hope you take the friendly advice, cause it looks like you have a top of the line Newgrounds series here!!!!
Keep up the good work bud!
indiana jones rules !
the real movies are great ! I like ur spoofs too. But the first Eggdiana Jones was much better. I didn't like the voices actually that much, i hate clock voices. Other then that, a good movie !