constructive critisism
OK, first....spell it like this Criticism
sorry :(
BUT, beyond that, I thought the work itself was excellent. The one thing that I would have made a little different was the color of the sky. Either a tad lighter (check out the flash project "rise of the mushroom kingdom"), or some moonlight so that I could better appreciate the visuals.
Well done, much better than I could do.
Keep up the good work, I gave you a 5!