Nice work
I like it... alot..! (:. The first one was better though. I don't really know what made the first one better though (sry ^^)...
Reviews for "These mistakes 2"
nubbinownz responds:
hehe most people aren't able to tell me what causes them to like the first more. But I still appreciate the feedback either way :)
Interesting and good
This is a good submission! The slow parts are pretty, but a little too soft for a DnB song in my opinion. The rest of the drums are exactly what I like, crazy filters and ever changing beats while still maintaining sanity. By the way, is that a Scream 4 Distortion I hear on the drums? And a Vocoder around 2:50. I suspect you use Reason, like me!
nubbinownz responds:
yessir I do !!! thank you very much !
I think I know what it is...
In some places, you believe it's going to go one way, yet then it goes an entirely different direction - almost like it's starting over with the story. It's too busy for too long in some areas, and this almost feels forced, unlike your first piece. It also had that lyric thing in it in the first one - something that appeared to give the song meaning. This seems like a forced story that was made up as it went along, without much planning. The first one just seemed to flow. This is good nonetheless, but still... v.v I think this still has potential left in it. ;P
nubbinownz responds:
hehe thank you very much, I think that makes sense. These mistakes was one of my very first songs, and had ALOT of emotion attached to it. This one here was more of a revision of that song.
thank you for the great review man :D
Good
Few kinks here and there, but overall its good.
nubbinownz responds:
thank you :D
hmmm. . .
the beginning is WAY to slow, but from 2:20 on it kicks much ass.
nubbinownz responds:
hehe that was kinda the idea. Thank you though :D