Reviews for Sword Two

[Rubbertje]

OMG!

I really enjoyed this movie, but I don't believe you actually worked that long on this.. OK OK, it looks like it was very many work, but not 2 years (1 year, whatever).. never.. but anyway, GREAT WORK! I loved how the fire moved with the swords and how the sword became more powerfull after each kill.. But I don't really saw a story in this.. but that doesn't have to be in a good stickmovie like this one, I think this submission deserves the front page for a few days!

Good work!

Greetz,
Rubbertje

ChickenGizzard responds:

Maybe not really that long. Perhaps I overexaggerated that. Maybe about a month of actual work. But it took at least 2 years to get off my lazy ass to actually finish it, though.

[The-Clown]

Stick Suicide, GOOD! *Moves hand*

The concept of stick fights is a little tired, but this is still good. This is how stick fights should be done.

[NeeKnight]

Nice!

There are so many crappy stick flashes submitted to NG that I enjoy seeing a good one (I voted 5). I also enjoy a good sword fight, and this flash was both original and well made. Animation was good, but you might want to slightly increase the framerate and add more frames. Good job, I look forward to more of your work.

[Lotro]

O_O

Man, that was pretty good. I enjoyed it, and I liked how he had to defeate more guys to get his sword to have more powers. It was cool, I would be happy to see another one like this.

[Mecheatgood]

Nice job, well done.

Hello Hyper. I have watched and reviewed your Flash movie “Sword Two” from the flash website newgrounds.com. I liked you movie because it displays the fact that one is powerful because of the abilities that one holds. I have points that I’d like to point out.

Heroes: Abilities

Using the new abilities to get ahead and defeat his opponents was nice. I have been studying about heroes. What make heroes, heroes is that they have abilities that help them avoid death and defeat way above average then the average person. The sword abilities granted the main character the hero classification.

Animation

Your flash animation is really nicely well done. The kicks and swings of the swords were magnificent. The flashing of the electric type person flying around was really great. You have really nice talent and I have a few suggestions for your next movie, if you wish to make another.

Since you have the ability to do great animation, you should go onto the next step. Making a Flash movie with a story. I going to make suggestion for you taking into account the talent you have to work with.

Movie Suggestion: Warlord

I am thinking of story where the main character goes on a quest. He has an encounter with a horrible Warlord that slaughters his home village. I am being very basic. During his encounter with the Warlord, display some of the Warlords abilities that the main character will have to deal with later. He survives somehow and now must seek vengeance. Then make his journey interesting and have a finally confrontation with the Warlord. The Warlords past displayed abilities are beaten and it’s a hit! Add more story events of course. Good Luck if you wish to go ahead with a new movie.

In Conclusion

This movie was a job well done. I have placed this review on newgrounds.com and have sent a copy to your email. I liked your movie and I hope you will continue working on more movies.

Mecheatgood
Flash Critic
August 21, 2003