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THIS IS THE BEST THING I EVER SAW ON NG!!!!!!keep up the good work!!
Reviews for "Sword Two"
Mmm, swords
That was pretty damn good, but it wasn't really much of a "story" as you said. Overall, very good and gory.
It was good
id like to offer u some advice, you're good at storylines aparently. so next time to save the majority of a year make a longer more in depth storyline, and let the graphics slide some, but thats just one mans opinion. Keep Making Flash Movies
kewl
This was a cool movie a year well spent my friend very nice good luck with your other movies comming up IF u make more well nice movie keep up the good work
Nice job, well done.
Hello Hyper. I have watched and reviewed your Flash movie “Sword Two” from the flash website newgrounds.com. I liked you movie because it displays the fact that one is powerful because of the abilities that one holds. I have points that I’d like to point out.
Heroes: Abilities
Using the new abilities to get ahead and defeat his opponents was nice. I have been studying about heroes. What make heroes, heroes is that they have abilities that help them avoid death and defeat way above average then the average person. The sword abilities granted the main character the hero classification.
Animation
Your flash animation is really nicely well done. The kicks and swings of the swords were magnificent. The flashing of the electric type person flying around was really great. You have really nice talent and I have a few suggestions for your next movie, if you wish to make another.
Since you have the ability to do great animation, you should go onto the next step. Making a Flash movie with a story. I going to make suggestion for you taking into account the talent you have to work with.
Movie Suggestion: Warlord
I am thinking of story where the main character goes on a quest. He has an encounter with a horrible Warlord that slaughters his home village. I am being very basic. During his encounter with the Warlord, display some of the Warlords abilities that the main character will have to deal with later. He survives somehow and now must seek vengeance. Then make his journey interesting and have a finally confrontation with the Warlord. The Warlords past displayed abilities are beaten and it’s a hit! Add more story events of course. Good Luck if you wish to go ahead with a new movie.
In Conclusion
This movie was a job well done. I have placed this review on newgrounds.com and have sent a copy to your email. I liked your movie and I hope you will continue working on more movies.
Mecheatgood
Flash Critic
August 21, 2003