ok...
There was way too much random stuff. Like at 00:35 there's a snare hit and it just came out of the blue. Shortly after there's some vocal thing or something, it didn't fit either. The saw was pretty boring too, since I've heard too many times (it's a preset...) The bass was nice.
imo you put too much unnecessary stuff in it that didn't help the song at all.
3/5, but +1 since you said it was one of your bests, so 4/5.