pretty sweet man!
I like this track as well, it sounds a lot like your crosses of light, but with a jazzyish hard rock style instead of ballad. I personally enjoy the other one more than this , but you got more instruments and lots of melodical variances here making it a nice rendition, if you can call this that..The strings in here fit real nice, and a pretty slick church organ to compliment the guitar. You should do a solo battle between the guitar and organ at the end. It also wouldnt hurt if you layed down chords on the organ track as well. Drumbeat works well and flows well, nice use of cymbals. But I do agree with jnry below, you're drums are overcompressed, I don't like how the bass and snare comeout, they need a slightly louder, thicker sound.
Everything else is pretty nice man, I really like you're style. I think you would be interested in No1R, another skilled guitarist on NG with a similar style. Keep playing that guitar man!