Greetings
Good stuff.. waiting for more..
I like the way you wrote the story yourself and animated it after a while.. that is exactly what I am doing now.. my cartoon GOthlan... I wrote the story a long time ago and I Just started animating it my self.. am working on chapter 3 now.. check it out.. I would like to see ur review there.. :)
Keep up the good work I will be watching out for your next cartoon
it was...
a good movie for someone with such little experience. not great but ive seen a hell of a lot worse.
!!CAN'T THINK OF WHAT TO SAY HERE!!
That reminded me of that old game, Heretic. Or Hexen. Either way, it's great for a third flash. I haven't really made...any, but if my friend ever learns how to then I'll be doing a lot of the animation. Anyway, this idea of yours seems like it would make a great RPG adventure game here on NG. It has fighting (well, magic fighting, unless that's all Coltello has according to your short stories.) and magic, which is a pretty good combo to make a turn-based RPG. But keep on doing what you are.
I realize you put a lot of work into it...
I gave you a 3... I hated the music... it was awful... ho ha ha ha... gah... I've never wanted to blam something that had that quality b4... but I gave it a 3.
Too drawn out
I'm sorry... Besides I had trouble understanding the monologue during what I can only call the middle of the movie, and that the action scenes had, well, not very much action, to say the least, the movie as a whole was just way too drawn out, especially the introduction. It had potential, but I can't rate this very high.