Sounds too synthetic to me
Here's my take:
- Opening transitions take too long. When it gets up and going, it's good, but it's a slow start.
- I like the way you toyed with the percussions. It gave your song a lot of life.
- I was looking for a more melodic bassline... but that's just me.
- Putting a wah-wah effect on the synth guitar would be nice.
- The components of the track sound very synthetic. I wish you could "de-synthesize" them by toying with the equalizer of each component.
And that's how the cookie crumbles. =P