:O
hopefully this doesnt make tritoch cry
Reviews for "Penny attack"
hmmm
It was pretty good. I don't understand the whole Lock and Clock thing, only that there is some type of rivalry and it's connected to really good flash artists. This flash was pretty good but like it was mentioned earlier the bloody strawberry clock looked a little cheesy. Maybe make it like a real strawberry and have jam fly everywhere. I think there should be blood flying each time the gun is fired. Anyways, pretty good.
Bah
Pretty good,need some work on timing the sounds properly. But the animations were really well done
Good in my opinion.
I have no favor for clocks or locks so I'll judge it as it is. Well, I like your animation and art first of all. The death of Straweberry Lock seemed.. well cheezy because of the "blood" but it was exciting I suppose. The part with the tank didn't make sense as well, unless you were hinting at the Lock Legion Assualt? If so, maybe a nicer background next time? haha, your pretty good for a beginner in my opinion. I also was wondering on the music, is it streaming or event play?
Good luck with future projects.
AngryArab responds:
yeah, i wasnt sure how to make him look bleeding good. yeah the tank is where the next movie will pick up from. the music was streaming, i had textaloud speech in it, but you cant really hear it, i wasnt sure if there was a way to make one layer louder.
thank you for the good review
Apart from a well movie,
...You've stolen Tritoch's tank from his advanced preloader. Thank you for stealing a man's hard work without giving proper credit where it's due.
The blood, as you said it would be, looked indeed cheesy. There was no plot - your character shooting Penny Bain who was about to hang herself, and your General attacking your character seems pretty much OOC. But that could just be me.
Please, try to give credit where it's due, next time. And work on animating extra little things, like 'blood' spouting from the body when another bullet hits. It really isn't that hard to draw.