Great job
Graphics were awsome, make it longer next time... make more and good luck
Reviews for "schizotypal robot 1"
hey not to bad sport!
i think maybe you should have chosen a slightly better storie line for a first short in a series like this, otherwise i loved the background and the 3d effect that you gave your character so well. cool stuff!
heh.
I saw the ending coming but you executed it nicely.
top notch animation
I liked your style, with all the lines flung about the background to suggest shading.
The animation on the robot was pretty damn good and the camera angles were well chosen.
The only real problem was with the joke itself. The joke was pretty obvious and I was quite disappointed that you didn't surprise me at all with anything.
Next time, if you try and think of something a little more obscure, it'd result in a much better movie.
Jokes generally aren't funny when you see them coming.
Still, as I said, the production values were really high so I have high hopes for future episodes. :)
madeofsquares responds:
thanks for the review -- there's nothing more useful than constructive criticism.
i did try to get a good balance between the viewer anticipating the joke and there being a little suprise, which i now admit is hard to do.
i'll bear this in mind next time..
Not Bad
Pretty funny didn't leave it open for much of a sequel tho.