Very good!
Since this is your first, I must compliment you! Nice done. I'm looking forward to episode one. Shame bout the sound though.. As I'm a big sound lover, I hope there will be some in episode 1.
Very good!
Since this is your first, I must compliment you! Nice done. I'm looking forward to episode one. Shame bout the sound though.. As I'm a big sound lover, I hope there will be some in episode 1.
Ok
Sound would add a lot.
Also, the line "This is not vengance, it's punishment" is very weak and you should change it. The guy killed his wife for gods sake.
This was good as a teaser.
But if the acctuall movie turns out as boring as this Ill kill myself.
Not too shabby...
Needs music... maybe a voiceover?
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I doubt this will ever reach the sweetness that is the portal.