I laughed at the crash
As a previous review said, the short pauses between the speech and the action are a bit annoying.
The movie is generally a bit slow-moving but it was funny in parts and obviously took a lot of effort.
Sorry, but as I have learned to my dismay, putting in more effort doesn't make it a decent animation. Ultimately, it needs to be funny and/or entertaining and so the most important thing is the storyline.
Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stuff from you in future.
Stay fizzy,
Bez