Sweet!!
I like the part from :15 to :42, which is basically the meat of the song, but was still pretty neat! I do agree with Chandler, though, this song isn't finished. You've come up with what can be made into an excellent chorus. Take this song, and build on it! I'm not docking points because of it's unfulfilled potential, because after all, I'm rating the song, not the song it could become. Not trying to be anal, but I'd hate to see such a good piece of work with so much potential go to waste, but still, good job! It's unique, it gets in your head, and it has a beat that'll make anyone start humming it out of the blue at school or work, I know I will!