great
this one was great, the battle against Sigma was, it makes me want to go dig out my old Mega Man games and play them
Reviews for "MegaMan/X:Final Battle 6"
It was great
To the last reviewer:
1) Most of the people that go to Newgrounds are American.
2) Would you want to watch Zero fight for at least 15 mins, then having X show up, then fight for another 15 mins?
3)It would if the non-atoganist hated the person that was being killed.
4) "!!!" and "???" are used alot in video games. That makes them official.
5)The view would have to be stupid to watch something called "_______ Final battle part 6" and then complain about having an unclear story.
CheveLoco responds:
thanx for your response..hehe...:P
Review attached, job well done.
Hello. My name is Mecheatgood and I have reviewed your flash movie thoroughly. Thus naming myself a flash movie critic. Not an official or certified flash movie critic anyway, mined you.
The Speeches
The speech text were flashed at a such fast pace that only an American born person or High School Graduate could read the text above the characters heads. If the viewer tried to make out a word that the viewer did not know, the time that took the viewer to make out the word would be enough time for 3 to 5 speech text to appear, thus placing the person behind, lost, baffled, and ultimately, dismayed. Try having Text box toward the top of the movie screen like the way Mega Man X 1 has it. The character' s face in the text box would also be great. Another thing, when a character speaks in their head the characters words come out italicized.
Destruction of the Mavericks
X and Zero were destroying Mavericks with only a two or less cannon blast and beam sword swipes. Everyone knows that X and Zero are not capable of accomplish that on there own. Maybe if you added a part to your movie where X and Zero found a secret item that is the weakness to all factory produced Maverick, then a cannon blast and sword swipe leading to destruction makes sense.
Preview Appearance?
In the beginning of the flash movie there was a preview I believe. It said something about “a better human race...” “they succeed...” “Coming fall of 2003...” and “X4...” I couldn’t tell whether it was the prologue to the movie or a preview. Maybe you could copy that green screen that says, “The following preview is appropriate for all viewers”. Following that you could have, “Now our feature presentation.”
Vile’s Apparition
Why did suddenly Vile appear? I have seen the other past movies and Vile didn’t have anything to do with the movie any of the movies. Viles appearance was unaccounted for.
Morality
When Sigma held Bass and was bringing him to death, the non-antagonist would never sacrifice a life to get the upper hand. That would not happen under any situation.
Speech composition
!? is acceptable in professional writing but !!! or ??? is not. Also just before Sigma blast Bass, Sigma said, “Useless robot...” but in the movie what is displayed over Sigma’s character is Bass: Useless robot...
Unclear story
In the beginning of the movie, there are 6 characters to be viewed. When the viewer enters the movie, the viewer does not know what is going on. A prologue to the movie is necessary because this is a continuation of past episodes. The author or the critic does not need an intro because they are the researches and the architect of the movie. Everyone else viewing the movie isn’t. Therefore they need an explanation of the past events. Or the viewers won’t be able to follow the story and have to be guessing throughout the movie what might be going on, who is the antagonist and who is not, what the character is talking about, and so much more. Avoid the confusion. Add a prologue. Maybe flash a few scenes from past movies or have a narrative written black faced introduction scene.
X’s and Zero’s Glory
X and Zero fought the factory produced Maverick army thus giving them fame and glory. The flash movie was titled Mega Man and X therefore the battle should have been X and Mega Man as the triumphits, not Zero and X. Even in spite of the fact that Zero may be favored more than the original Mega Man.
In conclusion
The movie was a job well done. Hopefully this review will do some help instead of damage. I have placed this review on Newgrounds and have sent a copy to your email address. Again, job well done. Keep up the good work.
Sign,
Mecheatgood
Flash Critic
August 4, 2003
CheveLoco responds:
nice review thanx..too long to answer here so i have answered in an email..
Oh no!
Not another Megamen X!
Not the best of the series, but still great!
If only Mavericks were that easy in games... I mean, Zero blew up 3 of them in a single move! Just too bad for Bass...
I prefered the first MegaMan/X: Final Battle
CheveLoco responds:
hard to make a long fight with all the mavericks with just 5mb