Reviews for The Last Battle PART 2

[Kuronakkin]

This movie is lacking

Your animatation is original, yet I can't really comment on the story, mainly because you didn't have one. It really would have been better with a storyline (lowering Style to a 4). You exploisions and light, fire, and blood effects were poor and didn't coencide with the rest of the animation (Violence 3 and note Graphics). Some far-away shots looked extremly primitive and you could barely tell that they were the same characters up close (Graphics 5). It needed sound effects and did it really have to have the same idetical song as the first movie (Sound 3)?

scr4ppy responds:

hehe. Finally a honnest review in.
You are right in most points.

Indeed the explosions are cheap. I just don't know how to draw and animate them.

And if you're reffering to the stickfigure climbing up the tank: that is one of the poorest scenes in movie. I just didn't know how to do it better(besides just to drwa every frame a char).

But I won't add sound-effects. When you are adding sound effect you should add sounds for all things and just the explosions and gunfire. You need mechanical noise, ambient, etc.
I have no idea where to find all these sounds.
The only thing I do not understand is why you would lower the style if story lacks "story".

Thnx for the more crotocal look on my flash...

Try to review part 1 for me...

[jqproductions]

Needs story, good shading.

Good shading, but it lacked a story. Other than that it was ok.

[nipplefart]

Nipple fart

Dud this thing was funny, i give it a full 10 on humar, was god taking ap piss at the time adn the piss wads were coming from the sky?? also next time you try to ripp of a movie learn how to draw. You spent 500 dollers on a soft ware that you cant even use, wow and it probably took you 2 years just to draw the people to make them perfect in your standereds. but really they look crippled and why are they holding hands? in episode one what was up with the bears asses or were they ships i dont really know...

[Max-A-Million]

well if u have noting else to do

ur drawing and style was nice.. music good.. but it is so slow.. u need to work on it some more.. but it is better then some of the other shit i have seen..