Needs story, good shading.
Good shading, but it lacked a story. Other than that it was ok.
Reviews for "The Last Battle PART 2"
Absolutly the most brilliant animation
I love the cyborg,monster,zombie things...and that tower...please make more for us fans of flash.
Enjoyable style
My favorite animation style.
great, but could be better
i dont review many movies, but i noticed that both of us had a similar problem with our movies, the lack of the right sounds. even after i added sound to my movie called air strike 2, it still didnt sound great cuz there were to many things that i couldnt give sound to. so the only thing i had going for the movie was great graphics.
Also some of the scenes were not as great as others, a problem that i get a lot cuz as you race to get something finished or you learn more about flash, some scenes will be a lot better than others.
But this was a very good movie, and very original too, i havent seen and movies like this. i give you props, cuz this movie must have been difficult to make. your movie is great at daily feature.
This movie is lacking
Your animatation is original, yet I can't really comment on the story, mainly because you didn't have one. It really would have been better with a storyline (lowering Style to a 4). You exploisions and light, fire, and blood effects were poor and didn't coencide with the rest of the animation (Violence 3 and note Graphics). Some far-away shots looked extremly primitive and you could barely tell that they were the same characters up close (Graphics 5). It needed sound effects and did it really have to have the same idetical song as the first movie (Sound 3)?
scr4ppy responds:
hehe. Finally a honnest review in.
You are right in most points.
Indeed the explosions are cheap. I just don't know how to draw and animate them.
And if you're reffering to the stickfigure climbing up the tank: that is one of the poorest scenes in movie. I just didn't know how to do it better(besides just to drwa every frame a char).
But I won't add sound-effects. When you are adding sound effect you should add sounds for all things and just the explosions and gunfire. You need mechanical noise, ambient, etc.
I have no idea where to find all these sounds.
The only thing I do not understand is why you would lower the style if story lacks "story".
Thnx for the more crotocal look on my flash...
Try to review part 1 for me...