Great Graphics and Good Idea
You have some great talent in your drawing, reminds me of the Puke and Chowder series at Camp Chaos as far as drawing style. But I would have to agree with some other reviews. You need to pick up the pace of the story. It seem to stall in places but move real well in the beginning.
And maybe to break up some of the longer scenes cut to a close up or different view. Also it would have helped to hear the guy say something.
Nice cars BTW. Keep Them Coming.