Ideas
Simply run the comedy skit longer and finish the movie!
Ideas
Simply run the comedy skit longer and finish the movie!
okay
Hmmm
Yes, that was pointless, but interesting in its simple little way. I actually liked the bare nature of it and the fbf wasn't all that bad. In fact, I would like to see more animation like that, perhaps developed into an equally simple story. Keep up the good work!
pretty piontless
but, not bad, ii gotta say
You're gonna go places
Your artistic cartoony style is not only well done, but it could be the start to big things for you. As for the movie, it's not much, but I think in time you can very well be the next Matt Groening, in terms of visuals.
Keep it up!
-Phantos
thanks alot, the thing is that this is only some of the cartoon, you havnt seen the rest! hahaha. anyways yeah
Hmm
Not bad so far. Should work on your graphics a little more. Animation and voice overlay isn't bad. Can't wait to see the final project though to see how much better you make it. I look at it this way, it's further then I am at the moment. Plus practice makes you better.
You might also want to redraw the beginning where you press the start. Plus add a loading screen. FlashKit I think has info on those.
nbh is also right about your name. You might want to re-think that one through.
Good luck!