Feedback?
Well... First off, the art needs work. I understand that you are still a beginner, but... That does not make inexcusable the fact that both characters looked like they were taking a shit throughout the entire movie.
The fight scene was particularly horrid... They looked like Rock'em Sock'em Ballerinas.
All of this can, of course, be fixed, with practice. I hope your later works show improvement over this, which I am giving a zero.